jueves, 7 de abril de 2016

Narrative



Narrative paragraph:

A narrative paragraph tells the story of an event, providing the relevant details of when and where the event occurred as well as who was included and what transpired. The paragraph describes either an actual event or a fictional one that the writer creates

“The shades among us:

Once upon at the time, there was a guy called Leon, the only habitant of the city; Leon lived in a city called Kadykchan, Russia. He was alone in the city because the city was cursed, all the habitants died, except he. The curse consisted in that all the habitants have to die, except one, and this survivor could not leave the city until he die at the age of 75, he had to suffer people’s nightmares and pain till that age. He suffered unbearable tortures, and all the terrible nightmares that we can imagine were chasing him, even the worst demons in our nightmares were hounding him. He was about to turn 75, five days were left, he was in his home, an old wagon, he considered his wagon a home; suddenly, he listened to little steps getting closer and closer, he was in completely darkness: open-eyed and scared, he listened carefully and tried to see what was coming, but nothing seems to come, four days passed with the same creepy feeling of someone walking, walking towards him. Finally the last day, the day in which he was turning 75 years old, he woke up really scared because the last night he felt someone breathing next to him, so he was expecting something horrible along the day; in fact a terrible way to die was waiting for him, as usually he go out to walk around, he felt someone following him, he entered an old building, what a big mistake, that was place in which he would die; Suddenly, a force captured him, throwing him to the ground; he was feeling an indescribable pain, the demon or ghost, that’s a mystery, was starting his body off, member by member until he died from that horrible pain. The curse was over, and people can live in the city again, but Leon’s spirit is still walking around, suffering, without rest.”

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